Revised Beats

Here they are:


Revised beats:

1. [Est.] Camera angled up at a row of windows on the second floor of a house.
2. [Medium] White lady pops out of window, stretches her arms and yawns.
3. [Over] White Lady sees her husband’s car with boxes loaded in the back.
4. [Close Up] White Lady’s smile turns to confusion.
5. [Est. + Pan up] White Lady stops in a doorway (of living room?). Boxes are in the foreground.
6. [Medium] White Lady’s confusion turns to panic.
7. [Over + Truck in] White Lady sees that a whole living room is packed up in boxes.
8. [Wide] Husband walks in with a box in his hand.
9. [Wide] Husband walks passed White Lady.
“Norm. Norm?”
10. [Over] White Lady watches Husband go in to bedroom.
11. [Close] Husband grabs clothes from closet. White Lady appears behind him in doorway.
“Norm! Where are you going?”
12. [Medium] White Lady walks up to Norm as he packs clothes into a box on the bed.
13. [Over, Close] “Norm. Talk to me…”
14. [Over] Norm holds up a picture. White Lady looks at picture too.
15. [POV] Picture of Norm and White Lady.
16. [Extreme Close up, Pan] Picture is of White Lady blowing a kiss to Norm.
17. [Over: 14] White Lady’s frustration turns to compassion. She reaches her hand out to touch his shoulder.
18. [Close up] Her arm goes through his shoulder.
19. [Close up] White Lady panics.
20. [Close up: 18] She keeps trying to touch him but can’t.
21. [Wide, Est.] Norm puts picture in to the box, picks up the box, then walks through White Lady. She dematerializes. He leaves the shot. She re-materializes. She reaches her arm out, then notices something.
22. [POV] She notices a gash in her head.
23. [Close] White Lady gasps.
24. [Wide] Blood turns her white dress red. She turns around and notices it running down her back.
25. [Medium] She hears the car start outside.
26. [Over: 3] She watches the car drive away.
27. [Medium: 2] She peaks out the window. Blows a kiss. Disappears back into the house.

As for 100% of the time, be sure to let me know where I can fix, rearrange, combine, all that shizzle. I have thumbnails for these two which I can show at the meeting, even though right now they are looking pretty scratchy haha.

-Mike