Kevin says: This is good. I still feel, the body posture is not working. Alot of it is the bottom part not moving enough. Ill give u this link, Richard Gunzer! He got hired at pixar last year, but if u look at alot of his shots, many of them, the core of the body still needs more work.
here's the shot: http://vimeo.com/39742521
if u look closely, they he does a great job of making the whole body moving..even if its small amount.
It's really coming along! I would have to agree with annlyn and kevin though. there is still very little movement in the cog, so try to make that feel a little more realistic. i think also the eye dart in the beginning where she looks to the side is a bit distracting. I think that you could maybe leave that out or make it smaller.
Also her upper body and neck look a bit floaty still, with the back and forth movements. It kind of reminds me a bit of a parrot standing and trying to look around. I would try and calm that down. also the hands look a bit even in the timing in the beginning.
The ending is looking the best though! try and push her eye brows down more to get more emotion in the eyes. Keep up the good work though!!
Kevin says:
ReplyDeleteThis is good. I still feel, the body posture is not working. Alot of it is the bottom part not moving enough. Ill give u this link, Richard Gunzer! He got hired at pixar last year, but if u look at alot of his shots, many of them, the core of the body still needs more work.
here's the shot: http://vimeo.com/39742521
if u look closely, they he does a great job of making the whole body moving..even if its small amount.
hope this helps
Hey Steven!!
ReplyDeleteIt's really coming along! I would have to agree with annlyn and kevin though. there is still very little movement in the cog, so try to make that feel a little more realistic. i think also the eye dart in the beginning where she looks to the side is a bit distracting. I think that you could maybe leave that out or make it smaller.
Also her upper body and neck look a bit floaty still, with the back and forth movements. It kind of reminds me a bit of a parrot standing and trying to look around. I would try and calm that down. also the hands look a bit even in the timing in the beginning.
The ending is looking the best though! try and push her eye brows down more to get more emotion in the eyes. Keep up the good work though!!