Its looking good. i think there's a few parts where its twinning. At the 3 second mark, when her hands goes up to her face, both her arms move at the same time. timing on that can change a bit. Also the very end where she turns to look at the guy. her whole motion stops and then moves all at the same time. I think if its was more popping, itll look fine, but im not sure if thats what ur going for.
i really like the hand movement. I think the body can be push. it needs a bit more movement to give it life. If u dont stare at her, ull notice she's pretty stagnant. Only when she turns to look at him u can then notice a contrast. Maybe at the beginning, she can slowly move backwards, then pops forward, puts her hand on her lips and finally turns to him...again, just try to add a few bounces here and there.
as secondary, watch out for the eyebrows. i know its a block in, but be sure to make it move.
hope this was helpfully. its looking good tho! again, thanks for posting steven!
Its looking good. i think there's a few parts where its twinning. At the 3 second mark, when her hands goes up to her face, both her arms move at the same time. timing on that can change a bit. Also the very end where she turns to look at the guy. her whole motion stops and then moves all at the same time. I think if its was more popping, itll look fine, but im not sure if thats what ur going for.
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as secondary, watch out for the eyebrows. i know its a block in, but be sure to make it move.
hope this was helpfully. its looking good tho! again, thanks for posting steven!