Cool! I like the pacing better in this one, though I still think you can linger a bit longer on some colored story moments. Or try panning on some moments to get some variety so it's not just a slideshow.
i like it. i think the screaming of the girl falling kinda made me giggle. lol..maybe lower that. other than that, agree a bit with others and its good to go!!
i think that everything is working pretty well. I like how the animation really goes with the spots in the reel and the way the story progresses. I haven no real complaints so whatever the others have suggested i'd roll with that. GOOD JOB STEVIE D!!!!! Thanks for the hard work!
Great! I just commented on the rough cut. I noticed you added some stuff, but check out my last comment anyways! :)
ReplyDeleteCool! I like the pacing better in this one, though I still think you can linger a bit longer on some colored story moments. Or try panning on some moments to get some variety so it's not just a slideshow.
ReplyDeletei like it. i think the screaming of the girl falling kinda made me giggle. lol..maybe lower that. other than that, agree a bit with others and its good to go!!
ReplyDeletethanks!
I like it! It's fantastic! I agree with everything everyone else has said above.
ReplyDeleteThanks for doing this Steven, it's looking great!
Also, I'd pause more on the modeling, it went by a little too fast.
ReplyDeletei think that everything is working pretty well. I like how the animation really goes with the spots in the reel and the way the story progresses. I haven no real complaints so whatever the others have suggested i'd roll with that. GOOD JOB STEVIE D!!!!! Thanks for the hard work!
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