Friday, January 11, 2013

Pencil for story moment

Here's what I have so far.  I cleaned it up a little more, narrowed the stairs and the window, and made the couch larger.

I'll start on color blocking...

1 comment:

  1. I think that the couch is looking better

    I still think that the stairs are a bit wide. I would go walk on some stairs and just feel the space around you to see how wide stairs are compared to a person. I also think that the doors are pretty short. the line work is fine, but i would just fix the scale issues. other than that keep up the good work!f

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