I think that this is looking good! her movements are a bit even in the beginning and i think that you can work on the timing a bit throughout the whole thing. the frustrated part looks really good though. she does look like she wiggles a lot though. there is a bit too much movement in the beginning with her head. i'd watch for all of that.
the hands are looking like she is holding on to her dress in the beginning. i'd place them in a different spot.
Hey Steven
ReplyDeleteI think that this is looking good! her movements are a bit even in the beginning and i think that you can work on the timing a bit throughout the whole thing. the frustrated part looks really good though. she does look like she wiggles a lot though. there is a bit too much movement in the beginning with her head. i'd watch for all of that.
the hands are looking like she is holding on to her dress in the beginning. i'd place them in a different spot.
Keep up the good work though!