looks good. for portfolio quality, clean up ur color, ie no line marks, shapes and edges are much crisp. make sure the forms read...ie the boxes, which side is light and which side is in the shadow.
watch out for the tangent, key 7, where her head meets up with the window.
also, i think the faces is falling apart. its either u have facial features or none. If u do, just make sure the shape reads.
looks good. for portfolio quality, clean up ur color, ie no line marks, shapes and edges are much crisp. make sure the forms read...ie the boxes, which side is light and which side is in the shadow.
ReplyDeletewatch out for the tangent, key 7, where her head meets up with the window.
also, i think the faces is falling apart. its either u have facial features or none. If u do, just make sure the shape reads.
This looks good Annlyn! I actually like the last panel a lot, I'd keep it the way it is.
ReplyDeleteI like this better, Annlyn! It looks less mudddy and the colors are working better with each other.
ReplyDeleteThanks all. I'm going to post the final script later today
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